Transition, Day Three. President-elect Obama's first news conference did not meet the gold standard.
(a) ...
we have to mount a international effort...
(b) ...
President Bush graciously invited Michelle and I to meet with him and...
(c) ...
I want to move with all deliberate haste...
(d) ...
In terms of speaking to former presidents, I have spoken to all of them that are living. Obviously, President Clinton. I didn't want to get into a Nancy Reagan thing about, you know, doing any séances.We're watching and listening to Obama, because he is an alluring figure
in speech, and because we need to.
Nearly perfect as a campaigner, Obama has not yet taken on the mantle of presidential rhetor. These faux pas signal not everything is secure. Surely, (a) and (c) are oddities, unexpected slips of the tongue. Haste is not wrong, outright, but connotations of rashness and overeagerness have to be avoided. (The phrase Obama wants would be deliberate speed.) The (b) construction is anxious hypercorrection. *Michelle and me were invited...Michelle and I.* Educated native speakers of English master the rules governing use of the objective case by puberty, and we apply these rules if we are serious about being (perceived as) in command.
The set of phrases under (d) is off-putting. In written form the utterance is syntactically conventional even if semantically obtuse. The
video transcript fills in what's happening while Obama reviews a thought in process, awkwardly formed, that is,
all of them that are living. As he continues, more slowly enunciating
Obviously, President Clinton... we imagine Obama is thinking recursively, speaking internally to himself, under his oral speech — what the aitch am I putting out there? — having recognized the redundancy of
that are living. At this point, right after the long, slower stretch
Obviously, President Clinton... Obama might have gone in a different direction. He could have laughed off his earlier phrase
that are living. He might have ignored his redundancy altogether, or brilliantly tied together his contact with living presidents with his reading dead ones like Lincoln. Resorting to Nancy Reagan and séances was amusing but also embarrassing. (Obama had to call Mrs. Reagan after the news conference to apologize. It would be instructive to have
that transcript!)
Another thing. The stagecraft was déjà vu, hokey. A dozen or so financial wizards, all but Robert Reich towering over squat Rahm Emanuel who stood in the foreground, akimbo and a bit jittery, to Obama's left, Joe Biden in the foreground to the right, with a big apple pie grin. The silhouette affected was that of a heathen menorah whose candles were lit at random, creating an asymmetry of waxed pillars and stumps.
On the other hand, Obama's first q. & a. as president-elect outshone anything that George W. has put on for the last eight years. Substantively, Obama was measured, cautious. But let's hold him to the gold standard, which, as recorded by modern media, is purely Democrat: FDR, JFK, Bill Clinton — three presidents who were never tongue tied and who knew how to put on a show. (There's also the chrome plate standard of Ronald Reagan who showed very well but said awful things, almost continuously.) To look forward to a president who communicates forcibly will make the coming months less gruesome, perhaps a clearer trajectory from the bottom, now, to the irresistible obscenities of a more prosperous and smarter future.