Tim Peterson
Since I Moved InChax 2007
Poor philosopher. Lewis Mumford. Captaina, your blandishments assure me u R assembled for the
little muskrat (
finger extended) and all the others in this unusually junto form as they pique.
Call me ridiculous, but the Rose of Sharon fisted right back after the
clock says / the idea of sleep will cause... what, childnoid? There's glow in Tim Peterson's argumentation. A reddish cloak? No, a huge spanking pink cashmere sweater.
If the lyric is in the plural, some
provincial pizza entrepreneur asks, do I press the buttons or take it in the hand or, messier -- in the first poem of 15 pages, "Trans Figures," wage a bout of "voice"? -- not finding voice, but voice craving
to turn itself into a body. Yearning qua pathology takes on the
status of gold, since Tim forgoes pizza on
a private boat (
a ghost script) pirating desire in a supreme state of careergirl drool. (That's why there's a clown in the bed.) The sentence (the class I call sentence) is requisitioned to
feel the spray and cure the sea floor of foam, catching its breath.
These contradictions to be aimed at in a parcel. Verbs
twinge in the center and the vast middle ground with all the undecideds be damned. It's a
microphone bare and
boned corset style, shiny like a teakettle. The shine is the glow radiating out of
a whole school from fruits.
Perhaps we need to take this seriously, feel the heated slap of the high,
black cape breeze amidst the epidemic. Tim's lyricism is germ-spurred.
Dark, slut, camphor, / duct tape summer. Higher still and sick I am --
I was inside the / nose that took in that ancient odor's nomenclature. I am, finally, most freaked by his view of what big words mean, ones that
sounded good...swayed to that sheen, all the glitter that awaits everyone in the perpetuity of the beyond:
I move / through space with shopping bags...On the other hand, Tim's title poem is absolutist in its punk-rattle no vote against forces of interconnective light, and, tougher to stomach, conspicuously social-democrat in its spirit-weapon approach to satirical, concatenated, macaronic narrative.
...ate Popsicles in winter at the pharmacy
were phrases "second pair of eyes," "proactive,"
"on top of things," "move forward..."
One gets it that the elements are strung together out of desperation and a deeply ingrained will to power
like technology?Screws up where you get to move
twist and the other up-to-the-minute dances. Gee...
You see, yeah.
One also can't help but try to shake off that old-humanist, lab-animal-overboard feeling that Tim would rather drink
imported beer (
come home from bars / exclaiming just a little too roughly) than keep composing journal and verse at this self-erasing, funny valentine pace. This is a poetry of jaded domesticity, then, brought on by now-documented,
windup proclivities toward substance abuse (hairnets, St. Joseph's aspirin) and all those attendant occasions for occulted confession (
People stampede just / to be the first in line…) Moreover, something like universal oversight (
a vending machine) is achieved, making
Since I Moved In all the more tediously oozing of nature. Overdosing on
fascination with the skinhead boy, Tim keeps sticking himself with his own
pert middle finger, an often-hidden side of nature, potentially life-changing, albeit network-threatening. I mean watch it, childnoid, when one asks,
Doesn't
it look like we could not be torn apart
unless someone took a saw and lopped off
my reasons for waiting...